Reflecting on my writing

Make a copy of this slide. Name it and move it to your WRITING folder.

For our writing we have been writing Narratives. We have been learning to add a great hook in or opening line to our writing and to start our sentences in different ways.

This week we also had to have a smile and alliteration in our writing. This slide shows my hook in, sentence beginnings, simile and alliteration.

We are using our Kaiwhakarite/Self Manager learning asset by reflecting on our learning.

My copyright challenge

this is my copyright challenge, we had to write what we like and stuff like that,

my mum has a company so she is online, and my dad works at first freah