What makes a good blog comment?

What makes a good blog comment?

We were learning what makes a good blog comment, here are some bad and good comments. I enjoyed reading the comments because some of them were just random and stuff.

Our learning assets were karangahau and kaiwhakarite

Thank you for reading my blog.

BY NOAH PARDY

Authors Purpose

We were learning what Authors purpose is

Our learning assets were kairanghau and kaiwhakarite.

I found it easy to do all of the questions in the book.

I enjoyed reading the book.

Te Reo Introduction

My Media

This is my group's media, the people in my group are, Me, Xavier, R, Xavier K, Riley, and Maia

we were doing something about road safety,

We had to do a lot of videos, some of these videos aren't about road safety because we didn't know we had to fill them all and we were running out of time.

Reflecting on my writing

Make a copy of this slide. Name it and move it to your WRITING folder.

For our writing we have been writing Narratives. We have been learning to add a great hook in or opening line to our writing and to start our sentences in different ways.

This week we also had to have a smile and alliteration in our writing. This slide shows my hook in, sentence beginnings, simile and alliteration.

We are using our Kaiwhakarite/Self Manager learning asset by reflecting on our learning.

My copyright challenge

this is my copyright challenge, we had to write what we like and stuff like that,

my mum has a company so she is online, and my dad works at first freah

THE TRIATHLON

Yesterday I went to the Triathlon, I was the runner in my team.  The people in my team were Ashton and Brodie; Ashton was the swimmer and Brodie was the biker.

I had to run 800 METERS WOW!!!!!!?!?!?!?>?!?>!?!

My friend Brodie thought that I would stop running halfway through but no, he was wrong, I DIDN'T STOP. 

We came in last place because my friend Brodie slow at biking.

I felt a bit sad by who cares?

I went home after the race my foot was super sore and it's still sore,

By Noah P